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Saturday, March 6, 2010

Grand Theft Poetry: The Choice

Two choices diverged before me.
I listed the pros and cons for each upon my notebook page.
As I did so, I asked myself for the thousandth time;
"Why must I choose between the places that most determine my future?"
I blocked out the second option with one hand so I could focus solely on the first.
Soft music tantalized my thoughts as I soaked in the pros and cons, options like a melody careening through my mind--the notes smiling at me like an old friend.
I shook my head, trying to clear the temptation, before removing my hand from the right side of the page and planting it firmly on the left. The music stopped.
I gazed at the second.
Mountains unconquered, unfamiliarity, and promise lurked dangerously in this choice. It was not what my eager eye and willing ear wanted me to opt for.
With a large sigh, I took them both again; holding them like a balance beam, my mind the weighing lever teetering back and forth.
From which scale could I glean the most potential and success?
Only if you knew! My thoughts hackled mercilessly.
I took a breath, and unsteadily, crossed the second candidate into an incomprehensible mess of pen marks.
I reviewed my final choice, the first, with satisfaction and peace.
I had done well,
Perhaps this was the path more traveled by--but the best for me.
The one to make all the difference.

4 comments:

  1. Many thanks to the poets from whom I stole:
    Robert Frost--Louis Carroll--Dr. Seuss--Xochicale--Hatcher--DelaCruz--Swenson--Donegan--Taufer--Yoshihata--Montgomery--Caldwell.
    Without your help, I could not have completed this assignment!
    Sincerely,
    Genevive

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  2. I loved the imagery. I could "see" the conflict in the poem which made it very interesting and relatable. It also became personal, though it was vague. Good job!

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  3. my my, it's like the road less traveled except backwards and full of INTERNAL CONFLICT

    "melody careening through my mind" was kind of a neat bit

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  4. Wow! I like how you compared the 2 things to a balance beam weighing the differences. I also like how you changed the text for only if you knew. It stood out. Good job

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