Friday, May 14, 2010
Film Analysis: Bridge to Terabithia
Mentor: Miss Edmunds
Threshold Guardian: Leslie, Jess's own thoughts and misgivings
Herald: Leslie. "Don't let the Terabithians Hear You."
Shapeshifter: Jess's Dad
Shadow: Scott Hoger
Trickster: Janice Avery
Ordinary World: Boring day-to-day chores, surviving the sixth grade friendless.
Call to Adventure: Leslie Burke beats Jess in the race; later she invites him to create a magical kingdom with her.
Refusal of the Call: Jess resists imagining, questions Leslie and doubts his own creative ability. "Enchanted Rope?"
Meeting With the Mentor: Music class with Ms. Edmunds, who praises his artwork and encourages Jess. "Have you taken Art lessons? You're Really Talented." --and-- "Jess, Don't let those other kids push you around."
Crossing the Threshold: Jess calls the pinecones grenades, he and Leslie build the treehouse.
Tests: Jess must find and return his father's keys; He and Leslie must confront & defend themselves against the Giant Troll (Janice Avery), Jess's chivalry to Ms. Edmunds in order to protect himself from Scott Hoger.
Allies: Leslie (His best friend), Maybelle (younger sister and confidant), Prince Terrian (P.T. the dog), later on Janice Avery.
Enemies: Scott Hoger (School Bully), Janice Avery (Frightening Eighth Grader), Jess's Dad (Imposing and Demanding).
Approach: Falling Tree impales the tree house (survival), Heightened Bullying (Maybelle's twinkies stolen, ketchup packets) and defense, Ms. Edmunds invites Jess to the Museum.
Ordeal: Leslie is killed by rope-river accident. Jess Must cope with his aching heart and confused emotions.
Reward: Jess is able to endure with his remorse and is still able to imagine.
The Road Back: Jess's father comforts him, Jess begins building a 'bridge' to Terabithia.
Resurrection: Jess calls Maybelle to come to Terabithia with him.
Return with Elixir: Leslie lives on in Jess's memory, Maybelle and Jess continue to imagine in Terabithia. "Can there be purple flowers?"
Saturday, May 8, 2010
Hero's Journey
Monday, April 26, 2010
Hero
Favorite NBA team: Boston Celtics
Reading . . . Writing
Pen . . . .
Paper.
I curl up with a paperback
And read quietly for hours
Laboriously I scratch Ideas
My brow spouts cold sweat showers
I yawn and set my book down
The story puts me fast asleep
I struggle over the sentence
I've been wording for a week
I crease my brow in thinking
The story grasps my full attention
My hand cramps as I speed write
My own adventure weaves suspension
I fly in freedom winging
As the story sweeps blue skies
My fingers drag enduring
Try to keep the writing alive
It's easy just to read away
And enjoy a sea of words
But when it's my pen scratching
I create my own bright world
I can't decide the ending
In a book or play I like
But I make my own adventures
When I find te time to write.
Saturday, April 10, 2010
Short Story Adaptation
The doctor's words felt like a stifling cloud in Joseph's mind. Joe quietly murmured a thank-you to the doctor, stuffed the prescription bill in his pocket, and trudged out of the office.
Before long, he found himself driving into the parking lot of the city cemetery.
Joseph pried his white-knuckled hands from the steering wheel and folded them across his chest. His graying auburn hair hit the headpiece on the fraying seat. His lips parted in a slow intake of air, releasing in gusts.
In, out.
In, out.
Joseph's broad shoulders sagged as he softly shut the Chevy door and trod through the clean-cut lawn. After passing several rows of headstones, he paused.
"Hey, dad." He murmured. "I've got it too. Guess it's just a family gene, idn't it."
Saltwater droplets began to dribble from his gray eyes.
"Dad!" he exclaimed mournfully, sinking in sorrow toward the gray stone. "Dad, what am I supposed to do?"
He tried to remember, remember what dad would've said to cheer him up, as he always did. . .
"Dad!" I asked with urgency.
"Dad, look at my fingers!"
The tall, dark figure of my Daddy whipped around backwards, his left hand holding a razor to his cheek. Creamy foam smothered the rest of his face, and I could barely make out the red lines of his lips through it.
"What is it, son?" Daddy asked, his big old blue eyes popping out at me in concern.
"Daddy, what's wrong with my skin?" I exclaimed. I stood up in the tub, where frothy pools of water seeped off my body and into the drain. Shivering, I hopped out toward him and outstretched my hands.
Those two, big ol' blue eyes inspected the ends of my raisin-looking fingers.
"Now those, son, are wrinkles." He said matter-of-factly.
"Wrinkles! I'm doomed!"
He grinned at me, grabbed a fluffy green towel, and draped it tightly around my shoulders before hoisting me up to the counter top.
"You know, son, they aren't anything to be afraid of," He said while tousling my wet hair. "I've got wrinkles," he said, tracing the lines next to his eyes, "But it just means I've been well loved."
"What do you mean by that?" I asked curiously.
"Well, my wrinkles come from caring about you, and from taking care of your mama, and from working hard at work."
"Really?"
"True as can be. They might not look pretty, but they mean I've got a lot of blessings. Growing old, it just means you've had a lot of life to live and time to love."
. . . .
Joseph's tears slowed to a stop; he wiped his eyes. Those images of his memory played in his mind again and again. He patted the top of the headstone while whispering a "Thanks, Dad." Joe's Chevy rumbled up the drive and away into the suburbs in the afternoon light.
Friday, March 26, 2010
Blurbs from Song Stories
Thursday, March 18, 2010
Song Story: Wrinkles
Artist: Diamond Rio
Link to Song Lyrics
Plot: A grown man reflects on a memory from when he was a young boy. Frightened by the pruny appearance of his fingers from the bathwater, he worriedly relates this to his Dad, who is shaving by the sink. His dad explains that "Those are wrinkles, they ain't nothin' to be scared of!" The young boy wanders down the hall after listening to his daddy and enters his parents' room. He hears his mother complaining about her own wrinkles/age, so he decides to take his Daddy's advice and passes on the motto "Those are wrinkles, they ain't nothin' to be scared of!" He completes the story with his outlook on life now that he is grown and starting to recieve real wrinkles; contiuing to keep to the lesson his father taught him.
Characters:
Grown Man (Main character)
Young Boy (Main Character)
Daddy (Father to boy)
Mama (Mother to boy)
Audience (Main Character is talking directly to audience)
Conflict: Main Character is concerned with wrinkles and the physical problems/disabilities that accompany old age--such as wrinkles, gray hair, arthritis, etc. His parents are also concerned originally, before they express their new philosophy.
Theme: Acceptance of aging;
As long as you're living right and loving life, don't worry about 'wrinkles.' They're just a product of time and true love!
Setting: Happy family Suburban home; begins in the bathroom (specifically a hot bath, then to the hamper and sink), progresses down the hall to the master bedroom. Setting of the Character in Adult life is ambiguous.
Friday, March 12, 2010
Six Word Memoirs: My own philosophies
#9--I'm gonna worry, but not now.
#8--Lost a fight with a Goldfish.
#7--Prevent regret before you feel it.
#6--Seventeen, College Plans, time to fly.
#5--Car stopped at a forked road.
#4--Fingers raw from pressing six strings.
#3--Blue eyes, free skies, heavy sighs.
#2--One lane highway ahead, no exits.
#1--American Stars on my father's coffin.
Saturday, March 6, 2010
Grand Theft Poetry: The Choice
Thursday, February 25, 2010
My Flaming Converse Shoes (Bad Poetry Revised)
I had boring sneakers previously,
Adorned with
Monday, February 22, 2010
Very Bad Poetry: A sonnet to my shoes
Friday, February 12, 2010
The Impulse: Train Station
W: Me neither. Who knew that three years could pass so quickly . . .
M: What are your plans, now that you've finished your undergrad and all?
W: Well, you remember how much I enjoy writing.
M: Yeah, I remember that little notebook you used to carry around.
W: The one you stole from me every so often; wehre you wrote your name all over on random pages? And hearts with our initials inside?
M: Yeah, that one. Anyway, go on!
W: You're blushing!
M: Go on!
W: You know I'm teasing. It's my job. Anyway, I'm leaving to Massachussets to pursue a career in journalism.
M: So fitting, for you. Someday, when you publish a pulitzer, I'll have bragging rights.
W (laughing): What do you mean?
M: You know, when this fabulous piece is raved about in newspaper columns and the news, and the whole literate audience in America booms "Who is Jessica W. Renaldi?" I'll pull out my yearbook, point to your picture, and show everybody that I know you-- that htis grand work was written by none other than my friend.
W: Well, I doubt that will happen for quite a while, if at all. But I appreciate the flatter nonetheless, Jake. (pauses, and mutters under her breath) my friend.
M: Jess-- (pauses; steps forward and back, shuffling, before lokoing back up at her, a faint smile on his face), do you ever wonder waht might've been?
W: I don't know what you mean.
M: I think you do, Jess.
W: I thought you stopped calilng me that.
M: What?
W: Jess. You haven't called me that since . . . since . . .
M: Yeah, I know when. But why not start back up again? Old habits die hard, and all that. And I missed you. I miss you. I can't hardly believe I'm talking to you now, while you're waiting for your train to take you across the country.
W: I can believe it. I can also believe that the old habits need to be left with the past. It's not worth it to me. I can't endure it again, Jake. You weren't the only one that was hurt by the distance.
M: I suppose you're right. But that doesn't mean my feelings have gone away in the least bit.
W: Jake, the distance--
W: You say it like it'll all be fien. Like we won't mind being apart, that our love will 'conquer all.' But it's time for me to move on. That was 1930, jake, and now its 1933. It has to be this way.
M (kisses her cheek, and whispers in her ear): I understand.
(uncomfortable silence)
W (feigned nonchalance): So, what are your plans?
M (looks down at his business suit): Well, judging by my stuffy garb, I think I'll be continuing on as a lawyer.
W: You'll do wonderfully!
(Train whistle)
W: That's my ride. I'd best be off. It was good to see you, really, it was.
M (picking up her suitcases and helping her aboard): You too. Good luck in Massachussets, Jess. Keep in touch.
W (with a sad smile): I think for both our best interests, I'd better not.
M (mournfully): Bye.
Saturday, January 30, 2010
Four Alarm Fire
Monday, January 18, 2010
Inside a Book
The best place to be on a rainy day,
One thing so amazing it sweeps you away
A land of adventure tucked between a few pages
An old rune castle not walked through for ages
A fearsome black stallion you valiantly ride
Or a tall strong knight you fight beside
Out of window on high falls maiden’s hair
The dungeonous crags of a dragon’s lair
Venturing the world and incredible sights
Enjoying breathtaking northern lights
The heat of a battle—your heart starts to race
A Pegasus flies with endless grace
A whole new world we can explore
All we must do is open the door
If books are something you do without
Then in many grand times you are left out
I’ve been enchanted in many adventures
Through forbidden castles I have ventured
A horse ride, a battle, a wild goose chase
Inside a book is my favorite place.
My Introduction (Continued)
Friday, January 15, 2010
An introduction to myself: Genevive Louise Noette
As for my beginning . . . I was born to a countryside family in Massachussets, the second daughter of James and Lucy Noette. An elder sister, Dawn, preceded me in birth by two years; and a younger brother, Jake, followed me two years later. We grew up in a small town, with space to run and acres of wood to explore. I applied myself in my studies, a virtue my sister shared with me, but Jake did not. We grew very close and remain so today.
I developed at an early age a love of nature and animals, a theme you will discover throughout my writing.
I attended Harvard university as an undergraduate in English.
--To be continued--